Wednesday, July 27, 2011

The Fantasy You Know


One of the first things you’re told when you set out to be writer of any sort is to “write what you know.” I’ve taught this maxim myself in workshops any number of times not as a mindless cliché but because really: what else is there to do? Not everyone agrees, of course. New writers especially tend to say “But I don’t know anything!”


 Of course you do. Have you ever been in love? Have you ever had parents who didn’t approve of the choices you made? Have you ever interacted with other people at all? Everything you’ve learned about people—or rainstorms, music, or car repair—from every experience you’ve had or shared with friends is part of what you know. If you listen to the way people speak, and hear the differences as well as similarities; if you notice the twist of your Aunt Mary’s hand when she makes a point, or the wheeze in your best friend’s Grandpa’s honky laugh; all those things are part of what you know. They all go into your writer’s kit, available whenever you need them.


I’ve also heard some people exclaim that it’s the worst advice they were ever given. They don’t want to be limited to what they know, they say! “I have an imagination! I can imagine more than I can ever experience!” Apparently they think they have been advised to write only about events in which they literally participated. Nonsense. They’ve invented a limit where none is intended.


My first novel, Molly September, is a pirate story, though it does have a touch of fantasy here and there. It takes place in 1672. Much of it takes place aboard the privateer, Jealous Mary. The rest is set in Port Royal, Jamaica, or on Tortuga. Right here, there’s a potential problem. It may be obvious that I’m not 350 years old, and thus have no direct experience of the 17th century. I’ve never been a pirate (other than being a Jimmy Buffet fan) or lived at sea. I’ve never even been to Jamaica! So how is that writing what I know?


Okay, I have to admit, my original inspiration for this novel was a handful of Errol Flynn movies (it began way before Johnny Depp put on the Jack Sparrow rig) and a National Geographic feature about Port Royal. I didn’t actually know a whole lot else about pirates and privateers besides what I knew from the movies. So I set out to learn. I read Capt. Johnson’s accounts, Esquemelling’s diary, and the Time-LifeSeafarers series. I looked at tourist vacation photos and antique maps. Studied hurricane reports, and the diagrams of the fore-and-aft rigging. Poured over every pirate website historical and fanciful that anyone ever put on the web, found more maps, more details. And even though I hadn’t memorized all that wonderful stuff, I had learned a lot about that world and filed away a lot more. It became—along with falling in love, defying parents, and learning to sing—part of what I know.

Well, fine, you cry. That’s all very well for historical fiction. At least Drake, Morgan, and Blackbeard actually existed. What’s that got to do with writing fantasy? What is there to study? There are no histories or reliable photos. Faery isn’t a real place. (“Isn’t it?” my Oberon would say. “I’m sure you know best.”)

In the last couple of years, my principal project has been a fantasy series calledThe Bells of Elfland. I’ve never met a fae, that I’m aware of, or sung my way through the veils that part our worlds, any more than I’ve sailed a pirate ship. How can I write about such things, complete with my own notions of the nature and location of Faery, and still be writing what I know?

The realm of Faery exists as an element of folklore almost everywhere on Earth. Are the faeries nature spirits, or the diminished gods of various regions driven underground by a new religion? Are they the fancies of an idle brain or the delusions of ignorant country folk teased up by Victorian folklorists? Maybe. Still, Tolkien and Shakespeare wrote about them. Were they deluded, ignorant, or mad? Or were writing what they knew?

J.R.R. Tolkien (1892–1973) invented one of the most completely realized fantasy world ever imagined in print, but he didn’t do it from scratch. What fed his imagination was a long career studying the oldest forms of English literature, including the traditions of Norse and Anglo-Saxon cultures with their tales of rings, heroes, dwarves, and elves. William Shakespeare (1564–1616) put Oberon in A Midsummer Night’s Dream drawing on the legends and beliefs of the country people he grew up among, descended from the same Anglo-Saxon folk whose languages Tolkien would study centuries later. (He apparently made Titania up, or at least invented the name, as it doesn’t appear anywhere before then.) Fantasists with attachments to other parts of the world use the folklore of those cultures, too.

Writers read. We have to read. Not just fantasy and science fiction—everything. Neil Gaiman, Terry Pratchett, Mercedes Lackey, Patricia McKillip: all of your favorite fantasists are part of the great continuum of folk tale and fairy story. That’s where the histories and maps of Faery and every other fantasy world are. No reliable pictures? Spend time with Brian FroudAlan LeeCharles Vess, and the classic fairy illustrators like Arthur Rakham, Edmond Dulac, Warwick Goble. Each of them has a vision. Each of them has heard the bells of Elfland. They’re in the kit, too.

The more you go to the sources, and to the folklore of other cultures as well, the more you learn. The more you learn, the more you’ll have in that kit that your imagination calls on, no matter the genre. And you’ll be writing what you know.

Wednesday, July 20, 2011

Goodreads giveaway winners

http://www.goodreads.com/giveaway/show/12220-molly-september

We have our winners for this month's GoodReads Molly September giveaway

Morgan V. in Eugene, Oregon and Jen G. in Shakopee, MN will be receiving their autographed copies of my latest novel in very short order. Many thanks to everyone who participated!

Saturday, July 16, 2011

Research update

Before I get too deeply into the new book, and before I completely pack away the Molly September project binder (at last) I thought I'd get some of the research out where anyone who's interested can find it. Much of the web resources have disappeared or moved leaving no forwarding address. Still, I was able to track down quite a few. There are, of course, many, many more out there. These just happen to be ones I used. I've even given them their own page!  Click here to dive in.

For the books and other print sources will have to wait till I can drag them off their shelf in the back room and onto the desk so I can build a proper bibliography.

Monday, July 11, 2011

Voice: A guest blog by A. F. Stewart

Author A.F. Stewart and I are swapping  blogs today. Here's her take on the sometimes slippery concept of voice in fantasy. 






You can call it voice, tone, atmosphere, but it comes down to how you want your book to read and how you want your reader to feel.

An epic fantasy will have a historic, old-fashioned feel, an urban fantasy will have a darker, grittier tone, and a paranormal romance will be softer and more passionate.  The question all writers have to ask is: “what kind of experience do I want people to have when they read my book?”

There are a number of ways to manipulate the voice of your story, through setting, dialogue, character, or description.  In my latest book, Killers and Demons, the tone of each story is set through these elements.  For instance, in Devoid, I used setting to produce claustrophobic isolation, and the unfolding terror of one character to enhance the effect.  I recreate historic Victorian London in two stories, London, 1888 and Victorian Shadows, to give a harsh, spooky backdrop to the plots and use the dialogue and description to bring that time period to life.

Now the point being, that changing any of these fundamentals modifies the essence of your story.  Putting a tale in Victorian London conjures images of gas lamps, fog and old-fashioned clothes; dump that same story in Nebraska of the same era and you get an entirely different feel.  Throw it in the California Gold Rush and it has yet another tone.

The same can be said of character and dialogue.  A smooth, confident character will spill over these qualities into the narrative, taking charge, driving the action and plot events forward.  With a timid, more withdrawn character things will happen to them, and they would shy away from asserting themselves.  For example, a shy man afraid of women would have trouble in luring a beautiful lady into a Valentine’s dinner as does my killer in You Got To Have Heart.  An entirely different tone would have emerged if I had used a shy main character as the killer.

Putting a voice in your work is like a thread that runs from beginning to end to lead your reader through the narrative and show them the world you wanted to create.



Author Bio:
A. F. Stewart was born and raised in Nova Scotia, Canada, and still calls it home.  She has always had an overly creative mind, and an active imagination.   She is fond of good books (especially science fiction/fantasy), action movies, and oil painting as a hobby. 

Ms. Stewart has been writing for several years, her main focus being in the fantasy genre.  She also has a great interest in history and mythology, often working those themes into her books and stories.  She has authored and published several books, including Killers and Demons, Chronicles of the Undead, Shadows of Poetry, Passing Fancies and Once Upon a Dark and Eerie...

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Saturday, July 2, 2011

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